英语 英语 英语 求大神解答批改一下 看看有无语法错误
这是我的翻译。不愿意指出错误了。愚作，请见谅。
You can go 你可以选择逃避
You can start all over again 或许这样做就能使一切重新开始
You can try to find a way to make another day go by 你可以找寻其它的路来让日子更好过些
You can hide 你可以选择躲避
Hold all your feelings inside 把所有的情感都锁于心头
You can try to carry on when all you wanna do is cry 但是当你感到委屈伤心时你同样可以尝试勇敢地继续生活
Maybe someday we'll figure all this out 也许有一天我们会领悟生活的真谛
Try to put an end to all our doubt 与所有的疑虑来个终结
Try to find a way to make things better now 开辟出一条幸福之路
And maybe someday 又也许哪一天
We'll live our lives out loud 我们会精彩地活着
We'll be better off somehow 那时我们将会快乐无比
Someday 我坚信那一天终将来临
Now wait 现在我们所要做的事情就是等待
Try to find another mistake 试着去找出另一个错误
If you throw it all away 如果你选择放弃
Then maybe you can change you mind 那么你可能会改变主意
You can run 尽情奔跑
And when everything is over and done 当一切都结束的时候
You can shine a little light on everything around you 你可以照亮身边的一切
Man it's good to be someone 哈，可能做一个大人物是件很爽的事情
Maybe someday we'll figure all this out 也许有一天我们会领悟生活的真谛
Try to put an end to all our doubt 与所有的疑虑来个终结
Try to find a way to make things better now 开辟出一条幸福之路
And maybe someday 又也许有一天
We'll live our lives out loud 我们会精彩地活着
We'll be better off somehow 那时我们将会快乐无比
Someday 有一天
I don't wanna wait 我不想等了
I just wanna know 我只想知道
I just wanna hear you tell me so 我只想听到你告诉我这一切
Give it to me straight 直白地表达出来吧
But tell it to me slow 但是慢慢地告诉我好吗
Maybe someday we'll figure all this out 也许有一天我们会领悟生活的真谛
Try to put an end to all our doubt 与所有的疑虑来个终结
Try to find a way to make things better now 开辟出一条幸福之路
And maybe someday 又也许哪一天
We'll live our lives out loud 我们会精彩地活着
We'll be better off somehow 那时我们将会快乐无比
Someday 我坚信那一天终将来临
Sometimes we don't really notice 有时候我们并没有发觉
Just how good it can get 生活其实可以变得很美好
So maybe we should start all over 所以或许我们可以选择重新开始
Start all over again 活出另一个自己
没有语法错误。
但从语句上来说：
可删去body，health即可；
make改成help，make表示“让”，语气僵硬；
habit是习惯的意思，A habit is something that you do often or regularly. 是经常做的事。建议换成性格personality或者character。
满意请采纳，谢谢。
1）Good morning. THis is the weather report. It's windy and warm in Beijing, Harbin is cold and snowy. In Lhasa is cool and rainy. Hong Kong is sunny, it's hot.
这里的后两句有语法错误：
A）In Lhasa is cool and rainy. 当用了 in 这个介词是，in Lhasa 就变成了（地点状语）了，所以句子缺少了（主语），需要添加 it，代替 Lhasa。句子改成：
Ih Lhasa, it is cool and rainy.
B）Hong Kong is sunny, it's hot. 这一句通常来说应该是没有问题的，因为用了（逗号）作为把两个句子分开来了，可以算是充当（连词）的作用，不过建议用 and 更好些。可以改成：
Hong Kong is sunny and it's hot. 或是 Hong Kong is sunny and hot.
一个你没有做的是播报温度本身，这个可以考虑加进去。
2）This is my farm. It's small. I have many animals. Look at these, they're horses, it's four. I have a cow, I like her milk. I like hens, I like egg, I have five hens. I have tow sheep and little lamb, I like this cute lamb.
语法错误：
A）Look at these, they're horses, it's four. 这里的 these 是指示代词，代指前面的 animals，所以后面跟着 they're horses 语义有问题。再来就是（逗号）用了2次，应该改成并列连词（and）更好些，或是变成独立句。可以改成：
Look at the horses. There are four.（看这些马，这里有4只。）
B）I have a cow, I like her milk. 还是（逗号）的问题。汉语句子可以在一个句子中有多个逗号，但在英语句子中通常无法这么做。英语句子将就每个句子必须按照一定的语法结构，而使用了多个逗号而缺乏连词会导致多个主语，多个谓语的断句结构。可以考虑改成：
I have a cow and I like her milk. 或是
I have a cow and I can drink her milk.（can drink = 可以喝）
C）I like hens, I like egg, I have five hens. 这里还是（逗号的问题），3个句子都是独立句，是无法直接使用（逗号）就变成了一个长的句子的。再来就是 egg 是可数名词，需要使用 eggs。可以考虑改成：I have five hens and I like to eat eggs.
D）I have tow sheep and little lamb, I like this cute lamb. tow 拼错了，应该是 two，而 lamb 是可数名词，一只小羊羔需要添加不定冠词 a，或是数词 one。可以改成：I have two sheep and a little lamb. I like this cute lamb.
第二篇文章可能较多的问题在于使用（逗号）充当（连词）的作用，但通常只能使用1次，而不能是多次。
希望这样的分析可以帮到您。
In Lhada,the weather is cool and rainy.Hong Kong is sunny,and it's very hot.
Lhasa前面的in需要去掉，其他地方没有错误。
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