帮我看看我的英语作文有什么错字或病句
今年署（暑）假，爸爸带我游览了庐山，庐山的云雾给我留下了生动（深刻）的印象。它们（的样子）千姿百态、形态各异、变化无常，为庐山增添了。。神秘的几分色彩。。。（几分神秘的色彩）。是啊，云遮雾罩的庐山，怎能不令人留（流）连忘返呢？
湖光山色，鸟语花香，淙淙溪水，都是宇宙的精灵，是大自然赋予人们美妙的文章和乐章。但这些文章和乐章却不是每个人都能读懂和听懂的。对有的人而言，泉水叮咚，在他听来是大自然奏出的美妙和谐的音乐；片片白云，在他看来是大自然铺就的最美的图画；( 声声鸟语，在他耳里就是捷报频传的阵阵凯歌),(缕缕花香，在他心中就是生活赐予的无限甜蜜 ).而有的人，面对大自然的美妙，听到的只是声音，看到的只是颜色，这样的人是无法领略到大自然的情趣的。
呵呵，我没有忘。其实，我已经在作答的句子里体现了，现在具体列出来吧：
病句：
1. “溪水淙淙” 应为 “淙淙溪水”，以与下文“精灵”搭配；
2. “文章和乐章却不是每个人都能读懂和听懂的”，这里搭配不当，“文章” 不能与“ 听懂” 搭配；“乐章” 不能与“ 读懂”搭配；
3.“ 有的人”，在这里给下文作了主语，应该改为介词结构作状语。
4.“听到的只是声音颜色”，这里动宾不当，“听到” 与“ 颜色” 不搭配。
错别字： “富”予 应为 “赋”予
老板，你这道题是有较大难度的，不少人都不会做的，你看，到现在还没有人回答，一般人都 不会做的。你应该可以多给点分吧，5分也太不能体现劳动价值了，你说是吧？呵呵……
l got a ‘D’in maths --- i got a "D" (in maths可以删掉了因为前面提到了数学考试)
l felt very depressed and grieved.--- i felt depressed so much.
but l kown l must fighting -- but i know i must fight on
l do more maths exercises.last l made it .--after a lot of excercises i made it at last
l never give way to fate.--- i never give up
when wo met a difficulty,we should keep dispassion -- when we met difficulties we should carry on and make efforts.
大写算不算 ！
when l (am faced with) difficulty
everyone (has been faced with) difficulties (in one way or the other). many people are afraid of difficulties.in fact,difficulties are not (to be hated).（For example,) in the last maths exam, l got a ‘D’in maths .l felt very depressed and grieved.but l (know) l must (keep) fighting.l (did) more maths exercises. (At last), l made it .l never give (in) to fate.when (we are faced with difficulties),we should keep dispassion
我把题目的说法稍微改了一下，这样说比较正规一些。有问题可以直接问我：）
太多的简单句老
虽然，没啥的病句
但给人感觉有点枯燥
在考试中给不了高分
平时要收集好词，好句
when l met difficulty
Everyone will have difficulties.Some of them feel afraid of it.In fact,it's not as terrible as they thought. I got 'D’in the last maths exam.I felt very depressed and grieved, but l know I must work on it.I work harder on it and finally I got it . I never give up when I face the difficulties and I think everyone should work harder and face it.
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