我英语不太好 那位英语高手能帮我看看这篇作文怎么写？？谢谢了
感谢信
开头：表达谢意，提及受到的帮助。
正文：回忆该帮助，高度评价/赞扬对方，表达当时的心情感受。
结尾：再次表达谢意，提出回报希望。
常用句型：
I am grateful/thankful to you for…
I am much obliged to you for your help.
I shall always appreciate the assistance you have given me.
I am writing to express my thanks to you for the many kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.
It was most thoughtful and generous of you to send me such a beautiful and fancy gift.
Thoughtful considerate considerable
It’s very kind of you to help us.
I hope you can know how much I appreciate your hospitality and your many kindnesses to me. Hostility
But for your help, I would not..
If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid that..
Thanks from the bottom of my heart for…
With thanks from every one of us and best wishes to you.
Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you.
I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises.
应注意：
1） 开头要直截了当。
2） 表明诚意，避免空洞。
3） 态度热情
Ex.
You got sick just a week before the final examinations and were sent to a hospital. One nurse treated you very well and you recovered soon. Write a letter of appreciation to the nurse (Miss Smith).
Dear Miss Smith,
I was just at your hospital when I got sick before the final examinations. First, I thanks for you could treat me very well and let me recovered soon. If it had not been for your timely assistance, I’m afraid that I couldn’t pass the exam.
Thank you for the bottom of my heart for your help and service.
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Dear Miss Smith,
I hope you can know how much I appreciate your kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.
I got sick just a week before the final examination. I was so worried that I couldn’t take part in the examination. It was just you that encouraged me to face the illness bravely. So I recovered soon, and I got good results in my final examination. If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid I can’t have recovered so soon and achieved such good results.
Again, I would like to express my thanks to you.
Sincerely yours,
Dear Miss Smith,
I am writing to express my thanks to you for the many kindnesses you showed me when I was in hospital.
If it had not been for your timely assistance, I am afraid that I would be still in hospital now. I got sick just a week before the exam. You treated me well and I recovered soon. Now I pass the exam. But for your kindness help, I would not have passed the exam.
Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you. I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when the opportunity arises.
Yours sincerely,
Dear Miss Smith,
I was a patient of yours one week ago, and I write the letter to you to show my appreciation for your help.
It was near the final exam then, and without your hospitable and generous help, I couldn’t have recovered so soon, let alone to get a high mark on the exam. I shall always appreciate the help you’d offered me and I shall be pleased to reciprocate your favor when opportunity arises.
Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you.
Best wishes,
Sincerely yours,
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Hope to have the honour of your coming.
Thank you!
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