10这个句子有没有语法错误，请检查一下，谢谢

10个句子，帮我检查下语法错误,谢谢！！!~

1. If you say negative to me, I will fire you. If引导的条件状语从句要遵循主将从现，也就是主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时，If后面是从句，所以时态没错，但是say后面应该加的是说话的内容，所以好像不太对吧…
2。The mouse was staying beneath the sofa, so I could not take it out.对了吧…
3.

1. 正确
2. 正确

3. We have to get assistance from (the) government, otherwise, we will fail.
government前面要加the

4. Steve has tried to fix the connector since two hours ago.
最好这样改
Steve has been trying to fix the connector since two hours ago (或者 for two hours).

5. Steve cannot enter the laboratory because he is not belonging here.
后面有误，belong为动词，因此前面不能用助动词is，而要用does，修改如下：
Steve cannot enter the laboratory because he does not belong here.

6. Last night, my parents and I went to watch the performance in city centre, but both of us didn’t like it.
后半句有错：
but none of us liked it或者none of us enjoyed it

7. The government announced a command that all of the citizen should not attack animal.

8. When my girlfriend kissed I felt embarrass because my parents stood in front of me.
kiss为及物动词，因此后面要有宾语，而embarrass也应该用ed形式，感觉如何，不能用原形，再有stood应该改成过去进行时态
When my girlfriend kissed me, I felt embarrassed because my parents was standing in front of me.

9. When we face dangers, our first reaction calls 911.
danger没有必要用s，后面也有错误：
When we face danger, our first reaction is to call 911.

10. The commander gave a warning that all of the army should withdraw from the mountain last night.
这里感觉时态有问题
The commander gave a warning that all of the army should have withdrawn from the mountain by last night.

头一句
语法是通的 只是太不合理

你要用这句来说明patent的意思
那里面就(理应)不能同样的字去解释
这道理就好像字典一样

你又怎能在同一句就拉出patentee 跟 patent呢

第2句 非常不通顺
如果你要proper一点的definition, 请参考wikipedia

英译汉正确,但一定时期内是哪几个单词翻译的?

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长沙县15023463302： 10这个句子有没有语法错误,请检查一下,The patent is a right that the patentee has the patent about invention and creation,namely,nation according to the ... - ？
曲翟法斯：[答案] 我不是在另一篇中解释过了吗 wiki上的definition已经写得很好了 A patent is a set of exclusive rights granted by a national government to an inventor or their assignee for a limited period of time in exchange for a public disclosure of an invention. 这是由...

长沙县15023463302： 10这个句子有没有语法错误,请检查一下,谢谢 - ？
曲翟法斯： 头一句 语法是通的 只是太不合理你要用这句来说明patent的意思 那里面就(理应)不能同样的字去解释这道理就好像字典一样你又怎能在同一句就拉出patentee 跟 patent呢第2句 非常不通顺如果你要proper一点的definition, 请参考wikipedia

长沙县15023463302： 这个英语句子有没有语法错误?谢谢 - ？
曲翟法斯： 错误第一处,for 去掉,因为pity没有不及物动词用法, 第二处 those后面加who ,定语从句关系词who不能省略 , 第三处 是not 前面要加上助动词 do ,don't feel … 第四处 是 ashamed of ,be ashamed of 固定短语 最后 phase from the heart 也有问题,具体不知道你想表达什么

长沙县15023463302： 这个句子是否有语法错误? - ？
曲翟法斯： 这句话没有语法错误.这是个省略句,其完整句子是:Anyone who knows that we can not but still insist I am not a fool is mentally retarded.

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曲翟法斯：[答案] 1.正确2.正确3.We have to get assistance from (the) government,otherwise,we will fail.government前面要加the4.Steve has tried to fix the connector since two hours ago.最好这样改Steve has been trying to ...

长沙县15023463302： word显示这个句子有语法错误,请问错在哪里?怎么改? - ？
曲翟法斯： with 前面不要逗号.

长沙县15023463302： 10个句子,帮我检查下语法错误,谢谢!! - ？
曲翟法斯： 1 否定句中要用yet 而非still2 有歧义 到底是上周visit还是上周help? 把last week放在colleague后4 but i do5 affect 指负面影响...不知道你要表达的是不是这个意思8 conscious不是动词... 把can改成is 还有 kindly改成kind 还有money前面不要用the 9 with 改成for建议: when using the words you are not familiar with, look up a dictionary for usage

长沙县15023463302： 请教一下,这个句子有语法问题吗? - ？
曲翟法斯： 从语法上讲,除了deal处于第三人称单数形式后应该加s,其他是没有错误的.instead可以放在句尾,单独存在,且不加“,”就可以.但是句子意思有些纠结,可以这样说I am worried about the problem,but my brother treats it in a positive way instead.

长沙县15023463302： 请问这句话中有没有语法错误? - ？
曲翟法斯： 没有错误,在这里it是一宾语what的宾语,What You Make It 是一宾语从句,其实这里面是省略了to be 即 What You Make It to be

长沙县15023463302： 帮我看看这句英语句子哪里有语法错误了. - ？
曲翟法斯： 改为is be动词要根据主语变 一般现在时里 主语是it he she 用is 主语是you they we用are 主语是I 用am