英语改错 一篇介绍工作的，在线等

改错一篇100词左右英语自我介绍~

LS已经比较完整了，补充几点
1、 “get on well”后面加上“with”，“get on with sb.”才是固定词组
2、 在“computer expert”前面加上“to be a”，这种用法里面职业不能不加冠词出现，但直接加冠词显得不地道
3、 把“it`s not difficult”改成“it would be difficult”，前面是假设语气，后面用过去式“would”表可能性
4、 之间“I also”加上“am”，“be good at sth.”才是正确用法
5、“friend”改为复数“friends”，一个人怎么交朋友？

初二的话，可以考虑使用一些简单的关联性词组，让文章变得更有整体感，而乃现在的文章还是过于零散，句式相同显得没有整合性，加油啊

在楼上几个回答基础上的补充回答：
第四题：定语从句缺少先行词，应该在to后面加上“the one”，因为lend the money 是要to somebody的，没有这个“人”，who引导的定语从句没有修饰对象；
第五题，可以有两种改法：
第一种，楼上几位说的，It is known to all that Taiwan belongs to China .
原因是句子的主语是“Taiwan belongs to China ”，但主语太长，故而在前面用it代替作为形式主语，其后用that引导主语从句。而原句那种形式，就把句子给破了。
第二种，就是把That换成As， As is known to all，Taiwan belongs to China .这样就变成了一种as引导的状语从句。
希望对问题有帮助。

Now I have 【an】 important character in my life. The lawyer is a character that i want to be.They have three characteristics that 【are】 so effective with.First of all, Justice is the most important skill 【for lawyer】 .Sometimes the lawyer is 【hiried】 by an evil guy, who 【has】 actually done something wrong with a hight benefit.【In this situation】,we should refuse to 【删to,后加V才用】them and turn to a right guy.For example, one of the lawyer【加s】 that I met in my life is 【an】 unclean person.
He 【took】 the money from bad guys to help them win the fight court.

Second【加ly】,intelligent is the skill that every lawyer must have. They have to memorize the law and use it well.If we are not smart【enough】 ,【we will be refuted in the weak 】 .【For instance】,one of the lawyer【+s 】use【+d】 a good law.so,the incorrect person 【could】not move from their 【performance】.Finally,self confidence is also important for the lawyer.You are fighting with bad guys ,and you have to fight with your self 【as well】.I saw one of the lawyer【+s】 in the court【 did not 】have self confidence.

He afraid 【+ed】to lost ,so the situation 【was】 bad.

作文有待加强，记住Where there is a will ,there is a way!

Now I have an important character in my life.
It has three points that so effective.(?)_
First of all, Justice is the most important skill.
Sometimes the lawyer is hird by an evil guy, who is actually done something wrong with a hight benefit.
So,we should refuse them and turn to a right guy.
For example, one of the lawyers that I met in my life is not a good man.
He made money by helping bad guys won the fight in the court.
Second,intelligence is the skill that every lawyer must have.
If we are not smart enough,we will lost the fight.
For example,one of the lawyers use a corrst law.
so,the bad man can not move from their perform.
your self 连起来
I saw one of the lawyers in the court was not confident enough.
He was afraided to lost ,so the his situation is hard.
按每一句话的顺序对照吧，(*^__^*) ..

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