英语文章，请耐心的高手纠错
After reading , I have a deep feeling. Robinson likeD sailing and adventure VERY MUCH. He did not IGNORE his father’s advice and CHOSE TO go to sea. During his sailing to Africa, He met a big storm and the ship HIT A ROCK触礁. All the sailorS WERE dead, The Robinson WAS the only people survived the big storm. He was sent by waves to AN island ALONE. This island did not HAVE any people and Robinson COULD only hear birDS singing and SEE goats GOING AROUND. He found a place to set up a tent near the water source , WHICH COULD stop attackS form wild animals.In this island, Robinson met many difficultIES and setbacks,such as diseaseS、lonelINESS, even stormS and earthquakeS. But ALL OF THESE WERE OVERCOME by Robinson. He domesticated the goats and parrotS, BRED a dog and two cats,planted barley and rice and saved the Prisoner from the cannibals. The Robinson called THE prisoner Friday, He became HIS best friend . In thIS way, the Robinson lived in this island for 28 years, FINALLY he rectunED to England.
At the road of life, there was full of difficultIES and setbacks and there WERE only two choices one WAS movING faward, the other one WAS GOING back. Robinson CHOSE former,SO he created a miracle, he OVERCAME THE difficultIES WITH his will and wisdom. So, I will learn from Robinson. In the studying、living and working, I will like Robinson, did not give up any chance, never stop in the road of life, eliminate any difficultIES WITH my will and wisdom.
顺便翻译“触礁”
多谢！
There are four seasons in a year - spring, summer, autumn and winter with each season lasting three months. Of all the seasons, I like spring best. I hate the cold wind of winter and the hot sun of summer. I also dislike mud and dirt caused by the rains in summer. But spring is seen as a time of growth, renewal, of new life (both plant and animal) being born. There are so many beautiful things everywhere in springtime. Our world is covered with green trees and colorful flowers. The sight of butterflies and bees hovering over the flowers makes me think that the butterflies are dancing and the bees are singing. The weather starts to warm up and the days and nights are neither too long nor too short. In other words, just perfect. In spring, the sun shines ever brightly. Especially when you are in the countryside, you can see green mountains, vast fields and clear streams. This scenery is so beautiful which makes us forget our cares in the world. Its beauty takes our breath away. So spring is a lovely season. Spring is the first season of ayear; we can make lots of plans during these days, as the old Chinese saying goes: “The whole year’s work depends on a good start in spring.” So spring is a season of hope and new beginning. I like it.
“syied”应该是拼写错误。said才对。“awful homework”这个搭配有点问题。boring比较好。无聊的。
“and I did and did so long time ”这个语法错误而且语义不明。
“I still remember:in the morning ,I did it ; in the afternoon , I did it ;in the evening ,I still did it!”一般起强调作用不这么表达。I still remember that it's whole day that I just sat at my desk and did my homework.
“don't like me.”like如直接跟在助动词后作动词用。意为“喜欢”，作“……像……”时它是一个介词。必须加上be动词才得以构成完整意群。因此这个属前后文搭配不当的语法错误。而且也很少这样用法。Do not share my pain.我觉得这么用会比较好。但是我给出的翻译是一个引申式句子。不知道是否符合初中要求。可能老师会判成错误句子也不定。具体你自己斟酌。后面的“It really like……”同理是错误的。必须加be动词。
“at last”终于。用法不当。“In the end，”
基本上我看了一次就点出这么几个十分明显的错误。另外文章总体上受中文思维影响比较深。不符合西方语言习惯。尤其是前后句子逻辑比较中式化。另外缺乏逻辑副词加以连接。使得文章连贯性较差。
比如开头中“How are you ?Did you know how my last day off was?”这句话除了“Did”要改为“do”以外。总体上并没有大的语法错误。但是这样开头是中文思维的写信方式。具体上我也不能整篇帮你重写。总之斟酌一下思维方面吧。
其他问题不大。
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