帮忙 矫正一下 英语日记
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今天星期五，明天是星期六而且还是清明节，明天没什么事做.
It is Friday and tomorrow is Tomb-sweeping Day, which is Chinese traditionary festival, but I have nothing to do tomorrow.
一般不说today is Friday, 今天是星期五，那么地球人都知道明天肯定是星期六，所以避免重复，一般不需要加Saturday，如果非要强调明天不但是星期六还是清明节的双重身份的话，可以改为tomorrow is not only Saturday, but also Tomb-sweeping Day.
晚上下班后我去找傻妞，只从我来到公司以来，从没有过双休，所以，这次的双休对我来说很重要。
I am going to see "stupid girl" after work tonight. I have not had a two-day weekend since I joined in the company, so, this two-day weekend is very important for me.
傻妞是人名，还是说这个女的绰号，如果是人名，那么直接用拼音即可“Sha Niu"，如果是绰号，那么加""
你去找傻妞，可以有几种含义，可能你与她有一个约会，那么就是I have a day with "stupid girl" after work.
如果是去她家的话，用visit更合适一些，全都不是就用see，不能用find，因为find的含义是寻找
也可以上百度知道，每天把你的英文日记贴上来，增加一定的悬赏分，让英语达人帮你参考，修改。
有几个小错误 我就直接改了I arrived in Rogue Encampment a few days ago. The atmosphere was strange. The first man I met was called Warriv, who told me quite a few things including the tragedy that befell the town of Tristram that I've alreaday heard before, but never seen myself. He also mentioned something called Diablo. I didn't know how to feel towards it, about which I've only heard words like terror or evil. However, I would listen to his advice to talk to Akara.
a few days ago, i arrived at Rogue Encampment, the atmosphere there was very strange. the first man i saw was a businessman called Warriv. He told me many things. i have heard about the tragedy of Tristram but have never seen before. he also mentioned Diablo. when i heared about this, i don't know what i felt.i just heard about it before, it is either fear or devil. Anyway, i will listen to him and go to talk with Akara.
I arrived at Rogue Encampment a few days ago , the atmosphere there was strange. The first man I met is a businessman called Warriv, he told me a lot of things, I have heard about the tragedy of Tristram but have never seen myself before. He also mentioned Diablo , heard that I don't know what I felt. I have only heard it is either fear or devil. Anyway, I'll listen to his suggestion to talk with Akara ,too.
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