急需急需急需！！！！！！求英语翻译大神！！！！！ 我的缺点是做事情比较慢，为了改善我这一缺

周一是我英语演讲！求大神帮我修改翻译的句子！感激不尽！~

1.第一句 我的名字是Lucy，这已经是英文名字了，后面还要再说一个“我的英文名字”干什么。后面怎么还有德语名字，德文你会念吗？
2.还有一句：My birthday is (on) October.你少些了介词on。
3.德国队是the German team。
4.my favorite football stars ，star你没有加s，你后面讲了不止一个你喜欢的明星。
5.开始介绍明星应该为The first star is Philip Lahm . 不应该说成This is Philip Lahm
6. he is I most like thestar 改为 He is my most like star.
7.你那个“奉献”应该用contribution，高贵的也应该改为high 就行。你翻译的词一看就是用翻译器弄的。
8. He and Loew led theGerman team won the Brazil World Cup champion.改为He and Loew led the German team to win the Brazil World Cup champion.
9.I also like astar, Leo Messi. 改为I also like a star named Leo Messi.
10.谦逊应该是modesty。
11. althoughhe is the German team of rivals, but I still likehim. 这句改为 although he is a rival of the German team , I still like him.（but 和although在句子只能有一个）
12.As a German fans改为As a German fan（去掉s）
13. I think, no matter who the opponent改为 I think no matter who is the opponent
14. appreciate and abide by the moral.改为 appreciate and comply with morality.
望采纳

The coffee shop at two point one
凌晨两点一个人的咖啡店

Miss once the volatile mood
想念曾经不安分的情绪

Walking alone in a grey river bank
独自走在灰色河堤

You too late to take me to the scene
你来不及带我去的场景

Thinking of you said to watch at night
想着你说过要一起看夜景

The window of the melody ， Perfume can't spread
车窗上的雾气旋律 香水无法散去

Want to save words courage ， or hidden in the heart
想挽回的话语勇气 还是藏进心里

Can't give you that feeling ，back to friends
无法给你那种感觉 回到朋友关系

Room empty serenity ，in my heart
屋子里的空寂宁谧 放在我的心底

Left in his memory
遗留在记忆里
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The coffee shop at two point one
凌晨两点一个人的咖啡店


Miss once the volatile mood
想念曾经不安分的情绪

Walking alone in a grey river bank
独自走在灰色河堤

You too late to take me to the scene
你来不及带我去的场景
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The window of the fog (the grey)
车窗上的雾气（那灰色的）

Melody (like you) perfume can't dispersed
旋律（像你的）香水无法散去

Want to save words (not buried)
想挽回的话语（埋不住的）

Courage (thought) or hidden in the heart
勇气（没想到）还是藏进心里

Can't give you the (sweetheart's)
无法给你那种（情人般的）

Feeling (how to) back to friends
感觉（怎么能）回到朋友关系

Room empty (with don't go)
屋子里的空寂（带不走的）

Serenity (still) on the bottom of my heart
宁谧（依然还）放在我的心底

Left in his memory
遗留在记忆里

Back to the beginning of our melody
回到我们开始的旋律

In the notes to lose your memory
音符里失去你的 回忆


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The window of the fog (the grey)
车窗上的雾气（那灰色的）

Melody (like you) perfume can't dispersed
旋律（像你的）香水无法散去

Want to save words (not buried)
想挽回的话语（埋不住的）

Courage (thought) or hidden in the heart
勇气（没想到）还是藏进心里

Can't give you the (sweetheart's)
无法给你那种（情人般的）

Feeling (how to) back to friends
感觉（怎么能）回到朋友关系

Room empty (with don't go)
屋子里的空寂（带不走的）

Serenity (still) on the bottom of my heart
宁谧（依然还）放在我的心底

Left in his memory
遗留在记忆里

翻译完毕。要唱的话注意连音的变化读音啊，还有，一些单词不会可以自己查。
可以再这里查： http://www.iciba.com/

My weakness is doing things slowly, in order to improve my shortcomings, I'll make a schedule in advance, to do things according to the schedule

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