中译英，最好是懂商贸英语的进~~高分~

商贸英语，高手进（中译英）~

** Bad recall
*** I was satisfied that a company's business products play a **, I am the Secretary for 9 / 15 made in Brazil materials ** quality problems is found to be an emergency recall of this batch of goods ** estimated time of arrival in Brazil, the main single-number:, single - No.:, INVOICE NO., CODE **, the number of **, and logistics companies have been contacted, half-way is not possible, please have received this batch of goods to Brazil and returned to Division I, Division I will assume all costs arising therefrom, and as soon as possible send an equal number KGD.
Please inform this to the relevant departments, the Secretary for the inconvenience I am sorry, thank you!
If you have any questions, please let us know

It is great pleasure in cooperation with your company for years and we are grateful for your successive trust and support to our company.
In recent days,our company is going to push forward an exclusive brand of our own——the XXX. The XXX is designed as a general outlet that most Euro-top houseware brands converge on. With this brand,we hope that the introduction of European houseware culture will offer Chinese consumers a better perception and experience of Euro-style living. We are going to set up new shops in cultivated business zones of Shanghai and Hangzhou on the basis of 4 outlets in Shanghai and Suzhou now. Meanwhile, an expansion towards the Great China section is in the work now.
Our adoration to your brand is as much as our emphasis on you,therefore we expect with sincerity that your brand constitute one of the principal brands in the XXX.
We've played as the general distributor in China for the British brand XXX for as long as 10 years. During our cooperation period,we've developed and maintained 25 retail shops in first-class shopping malls throughout China,hence we not only provide sufficient experience in retailing and managing,but also a sound relationship with various shopping malls.
May our cooperation be sustainable and our performance be adorable.

这是我花了一个多小时自己译的，楼主看合不合心意？

事件背景：客户发邮件反映收到我们的货物有损坏，要求我们改进包装，但我们的包装没有问题，损坏是因为运输过程中可能遭遇了什么东西撞击造成的， 回复邮件如下：（以下需要翻译，如果觉得语言组织的不好请帮忙更改）
感谢你通知我们此事，如果可能的话我们也乐于找寻更好的包装方法来避免双方的损失及不便（我们的货物在每次发货前都经过仔细的包装及在包装外缠3层以上保护膜来防止货物损坏及雨季原因）
一收到您的来信我们就和物流公司取得联系请求调查此事原因，根据提供的图片看应该是在运输途中受到什么东西的撞击造成（例如运输用的叉车）
此批货物是否有损坏，如果有的话请帮忙提供损坏货物清单
多谢！
TO；**（物流公司）
请调查此事原因并尽快让我们知道，找出解决方法尽量避免货物在运输途中造成的损坏
Event Background: The client mail to receive our goods to reflect any damage, requires us to improve the packaging, but our packaging is no problem, because of damage during transport may experience a crash caused by something, reply to e-mail as follows: (the following needs translation If that language organization, please help change bad)
Thank you inform us this, if possible, we like to find a better packaging to avoid the loss and inconvenience to both parties (each shipment of our goods are carefully packed before and in the packaging wrapped around 3 storeys in height to protect membrane to prevent damage to the goods and the reasons for the rainy season)
Receive your letter and logistics company, we look into the matter to contact the reasons for the request, according to the images should be in transit to see what the impact caused by (for example, transportation forklift)
The goods for damage and, if so please help to provide the list of damaged goods
Thank you!
TO; ** (logistics company)
Please investigate the matter because as soon as possible so that we know to find a solution to avoid cargo damage caused in transit

希望对你有用

Event Background: In the client's mail reflected our goods have damages, requires us to improve the packaging, but our packaging doesn't have any problems, because the damage may be impact during transportation. Reply message as follows: (The following need to be translated, with fixes on grammar mistakes, please help to change that.) Thank you for informing us this, if possible, we like to find a better packaging way to avoid the loss and inconvenience to both parties. (Each shipment of our goods have been pre-packaged very carefully and wrapped in packaging for more than 3-layer protective film to prevent damaging the goods and the rainy season) The first thing we did after receiving your letter was to made a contact with logistics company, and request to find and look into the matter according to the images that was shown in transit of what caused the impact. (such as transportation of forklifts) Is the goods have been damaged? If so, please provide the list of goods to help us. Thank you! TO; ** (logistics company), please investigate the matter and let us know as soon as possible, and find out a solution to avoid damaging the cargo in transit.

PS: 除了楼主之外请不要抄写，复制。 我用了超过一个小时修改语法的错写。 还有就是如果是真正翻译员翻译的话，也要几个小时。 我尽力了，希望你满意~

Thank you for letting us know about this. We have already contacted the logistics company and asked them to investigate the possible reasons of the damages.

From the provided photos, we feel that it is more likely that the items were damaged due to collision during delivery (than that they were not properly packaged). For example, the fork truck that is used to pick the cargo up may have crushed into the cargo.

Please note that our company have always been trying hard to find better ways of packaging to prevent inconvenience and losses from both sides. Every time before the cargos are sent, we would carefully package them and wrap at least three layers of protective film to protect them from rain and other kinds of damages.

We are sorry that this has happened. Please provide a list of damaged goods to us.

因为第二段的内容直接提到了公司方的处理办法，所以我翻译的时候把它提前了。你放在括号内的内容是不是要当做背景的？我觉得可以写进正文，所以就翻译进去了。

括号里的内容明确表达出“我们认为这不是包装的问题”这个意思，如果不想说得这么直接，可以将括号的内容删去，那就跟你的原句一样了。但个人认为可以保留，因为是合情合理的，而且表达也比较委婉，我是这么翻译的：比起包装上的问题，运输途中的碰撞更可能是导致损坏的原因。

To: (物流公司)

Please find out and let us know as soon as possible what has caused the damages, and identify ways to prevent such damages during delivery from happening again.

Background: The clients have sent an email notifying us of the damage to our goods. They demanded us to change the packaging, but we think the package itself bears no problems. The damage could result from some collisions against some items.

Reply:
Thanks for the notification. If possible, we are glad to find better packaging ways to prevent the bilateral losses and inconvience (Prior to delivery, our goods are carefully packed and tie up with more than three layers of protective membrane to shield the goods from damaging and cause of potential rain drops.) Upon the arrival of your letter, we contacted the logistic corporation for a request of the potential cause of damage to the goods. Based on the picture provided, it seems that during delivery, there are collisions caused by some items (forklift for delivery, for example).
Should there are any damages to the goods, please provide a list of the damaged items.
Great appreciation!

To: (logistic company)
Please investigate the cause and notify us as quickly as possible. Find some ways to prevent the damages during delivery.

希望能有帮助！

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