【求助，高分在线等】给外国朋友的信~~求指导

写给外国友人的一封信，请高手帮帮忙~

Dear
Hello,谁谁 is my friend. I am very interested in English.But i am not good at English very well.My friend says that you can help me.Since my uncle is an English,so i know London very well.I hope you can help me with my English.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes!
某某

Dear XXX,
I am XXX from China. i am 12years old. i eat eggs and bread for my breakfast, meat ,vegetables and rice for my lunch and supper. My maths teacher is Mr. Cai. English teacher is MR. wen and Mr. wei teaches us Chinese. I love them very much. The Christmas Day is coming. Wish you have a nice festivital in advance

xxxx

Dear XXX,
It's my first time to write a letter to you ,for your birthday.
of course ，when you read the letter，you can also find a birthday present that I meticulously chose for you。 Do you like it？
I still remember the days when we were kids many years ago，we used to be good friends then. when I began my primary schooling, you left. i haven't heard from you for so long。one day，from my friends ，I was informed that you had emmigrated to Ireland，what a big surprise! I guess you must be living in a beatiful house。
I can't remember the exact date that we met on QQ，right at that moment，I thought I was the luckiest man in the world. the world is so small ，isn't it？and you are a beautiful and mature girl now.
Do you remember the diary I wrote on MSN？I misunderstood your "Love you". oh, what an embarrest man i am ~~~you must be laughing me~~~hehe~~~
well，it's raining outside now ，you haven't go to bed ，have you?
it's just 21:40pm in Dublin ，but 4:42am in china。Now ，I’m writing the letter，and missing you。
how peaceful the night is！ we are so fortunate that we can enjoy the same moon。
and for that night when your arms were around me，i want to say that it made me just feel like that I finally met my long-lost baby sister。I’m so sorry I can't be with you ，hope you can understand.
well, I don't know how to express my feelings at the moment. in one word ，I wish you happy everyday。
best wishes, sweatheart~
and Happy birthday！~~
Yours'
Jack

楼主~~我帮你改过啦~~~~看看合适不~~~~

write letter --》 write a letter
primary schooland --> primary school and
I guessed --> so I guessed
Iwas the luckiest, man --> I was the luckiest man
beautiful mature girl --> beautiful and matured girl
it's rainy outside now -->it's raining outside now
haven't go to bed --> haven't gone to bed
21:40pm in Dublin --》 9：40p.m in Dublin
what a peaceful night --> What a peaceful night
see a same moon --> share the same moon
and missing you --> and missing you every moment
cancomprehend the reason --> know the reason
send the best wishes to you。 --> best wishes for you

好多的用词不当， 语法错误啊。。。 我也给你改好了
希望能帮到你：）

write a letter
and afterwards I haven't heard about .
I was informed that you
I can't forget the moment
mature 可以，不必用matured
21:40pm 要么 21：40 要么9：40PM
what a peaceful night！ we can see a same moon。你那下雨的晚上能看见月亮？
your arms were around me ,
可以理解我，理解不应该用comprehend，而用understand
send the best wishes to you，BEST WISHES is enough～～

meticulously beatific 这样的词汇太文雅了不适合用在像给朋友书信当中。。

既然是你的好朋友，其实写的内容意思能看明白就够了，没必要太苛求，她会理解你的良苦用心的~~

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