He asked me how gets to the shopping centey改错
以下只能作为一些个人建议, 我觉得你才是高手, 复合句用得很妙, 读起来比较书面专业… 两篇不是同一个人写的吧? 第二篇好像水准略高一些….
我文法本身就一塌糊涂, 只能建议一些语句用法和文章条理结构. 互相学习吧!
第一篇
1. The protection of the environment had became a daily topics nowadays-->Environment protection has became a trite topics nowadays (has become是”已经成为话题”, 不是”过去成为”; “daily topic”也可, 建议改为”老生常谈的话题”)
2. despite the media's effort to display that efforts had been placed on this subject, the total issue of environment still proved to be failure.-----> despite the fact that the medias displayed that a great effort has been placed on this subject, the current environment status as a whole still proved its insufficiency. (原句不是很理解)
3. How did it fail?--> How come?(因为我已把前面的failure去了, 所以以只能改成这样, 哈哈)
4. well, everyone had done their best in helping the environment getting better, but some had thought that a cleaner and a more organized environment will do better.---> (前后没有转折关系, 何以用but? 逻辑上不应该是everyone 都做到了保护环境这种事情, 请楼主再考虑一下这一点.)
5. those people had done their best possible to clear the forest and to plant trees in order.--->those people has done their best to clean the forest and to plant trees.
6. they even tried to artificially creat the best environment without any biological knowledge on how the ecosystem could do what it needed itself!-->but they tend to artificially creat a good human-oriented environment than a good nature-oriented environment (赞一个, 原句已经说得非常好, 意思是违背生态规律建造适合人类的理想环境)
7. Other things---->建议改成其他, 如otherwise, also等, 后面也注意衔接一下.
8. As a summary--->In summary
9. it is the ways that they are doing the things that---->it is the methods they take
第二篇
1. It’s not surprising to find that protection of the environment...---->It’s not surprisingly to find that environment protection...
2. on amongst--->amongst
3. careless--->inconspicuous (“不起眼的”, 对应后面的”huge”, 或者可以两者同时去掉)
4. in the industrial centers(建议去掉, 没有必要这样强调, 污染的工厂不只限于在工业区)
5. When we use plastic bags in the grocery stores instead of paper bags---->When we use one-off plastic bags instead of shopping bags (最好不要这样写, 试想像把我们使用的所有塑料袋换成牛皮纸, 那得砍伐多少树木…所有过剩包装都是污染环境的. 或者把instead of及之后去掉)
6. degenerate---->(这样说应该也可以, 或者说be digested by nature)
7. contributing to---->ascribed to
Based on the improper measures human took (article 1) and the existing pollution factors (article 2), you illustrated your ideas well on the failure of environment protection, you got no problem in English, they would be perfect if you could try to polish your thoughts .
From thought in depth perspective, you would try to also consider the followings.
In developing contries like China, people who consciously realize the importance of environment protection and put it into action is still minority, whereas these countries possess a majority of the world population, just imagine how many garbages produced by them. Concepts are roots of all problems, education and propaganda are weak points.
Although more than a hundred countries joined in Kyoto Protocol, the U.S., as the richest country produce the most greenhouse gas in the world, haven’t joined in this protocal. They keep criticising other’s pollution, but they also do no good for it.
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Try to do some search online to get more information to enrich your article.
Cheers~
Today is my Dad's birthday. This afternoon I went to the shopping center downtown and bought ∧present for him. Then I take the subway train home. Sitting on the train, I thought my dad would 1. a 2. took be very happy when I saw the present. At the next station, an old lady with two heavy bags got in the 3. he 4. on train and stood in the front of me. She looked tiredly . I hesitated for a moment, and then offered my seat 5. 去掉 6. tired to hers . The old lady thanked me a lot and seated∧ down. Seen her smile, I felt happy. I will always be 7. her 8. herself 9. Seeing ready to help other in the future. 10. others
这里的gets改为to get，用动词不定式的形式。动词不定式可以和疑问词whom、what、which、whose、how、when、where、whether（不能用if）连用，构成一种特殊的动词不定式短语，在句中可以作主语、表语、动词和介系词的宾语、同位语等。
Who to take care of my grandmother would be a big problem.
I don’t know whether to refuse it or not.
The problem is where to set up the tent.
You haven’t answered my question where to get these books.
The problem of which way to go worried him for a long time.
希望我能帮助你解疑释惑。
He asked me how to get to the shopping center.
他问我怎样到达购物中心。
He asked me how to get to the shopping center.
招星麝香： 有啊.宾语从句应该用陈述句语序.所以应该是He asked me what was wrong with me.因为从句里what做的主语.
昌乐县15646379327： he asked me what was the matter with me.这个句型对吗? - ？
招星麝香： 不对,he asked me 后面是宾语从句,从句表疑问时候,要用陈述语气,所以该句子应为 he asked me what the matter was with me.
昌乐县15646379327： 【英语】He asked me ( ) - ？
招星麝香： A (B错的原因是PAIR后没有OF)
昌乐县15646379327： 英语从句He asked me whether I find out the sender of the money - ？
招星麝香： 这是一个英语从句的宾语从句.句子成分划分如下:He (主语)asked (谓语)me (间接宾语)whether I find out the sender of the money(直接宾语).本句中的动词ask后接的是双宾语,即直接宾语和间接宾语.
昌乐县15646379327： 并成一句.He asked me. How are they going to do? - ？
招星麝香： 这是一个宾语从句 宾语从句最大的特点要用陈述语气 He saked me how they are going to be
昌乐县15646379327： He asked me - -------with me. - ？
招星麝香： 这里不一样,所有what the matter,what's wrong with等等,都是原来的句型,不改成陈述句. 【宾语从句,从句要用陈述语序.what做的是从句中的主语,was是系动词,the matter是表语.正好是一个主系表陈述句结构.】另外was就不说了.【欢迎追问,谢谢采纳!~】
昌乐县15646379327： 英语直接引语改间接引语的方法 - ？
招星麝香：[答案] 引述别人的话时,一般采用两种方式:一是引用别人的原话,把它放在引号内,称为直接引语;二是用自己的话加以转述,... →He asked John where he was to get off. My sister asked me,“How do you like the play?”→My sister asked me how I ...
昌乐县15646379327： He asked me when - ----- - would go . I \he\ me \her 用哪个啊？
招星麝香： 用 He asked me when I would go. 他问我 我什么时候要走. 从句主语要用 I he she we 之类的, 然后 he 在前面已经出现过, 后面再出现, 会有歧义. 比如说, 用he 需要翻译成 他问他什么时候要走, 前后他是不是一个意思, 会有歧义
昌乐县15646379327： he asked me,how are you?变为间接引语 - ？
招星麝香： He asked me how I was ?主句过去时,从句一般也用过去时,宾语从句正常语序:主语+ 谓语 祝你学习进步,更上一层楼! (*^__^*) 不明白的再问哟,请及时采纳,多谢!
昌乐县15646379327： 宾语从句有哪几类,请分别举例说明 - ？
招星麝香：[答案] 1.宾语从句在句中作及物动词或介词的宾语,从句放在主句之后,前后不用逗号分开. 2.引导宾语从句的词有: 连词that(在... what, where, how等疑问词(连接代词或连接副词)引导的宾语从句,如: He asked me,“Where is Mr Wang?” ---He ...
